The Texans are Coming, The Texans are Coming

Hello, dear blog readers. Whew, it’s been quite a few days since I last posted. I think this will be my new thing from now on. No more hard core posting schedules for me thank you very much. Besides, when I do post it will be that much more special.

Speaking of special, I have a special trip coming up on Friday! You probably guessed it already. My friend, Carolyn and I are going to Beantown, a.k.a, Boston, Massachusetts.

This will be my first away-vacation I got to pick for myself in too many years to mention.

Not only that, but I will now not be able to sing the whole Veggie Tale’s song: The Pirate’s Who Don’t Do Anything. If you watch you will understand. :D

Here’s a few funny slogans I found for the state of Massachusetts:

“Massachusetts: Our Taxes Are Lower Than Sweden’s (For Most Tax Brackets)”

“Massachusetts: It’s Wicked!”

“Massachusetts: Now with 30% Fewer Kennedy’s!”

~Brian DiMattia~

“Massachusetts: Who Fahted?”

“Massachusetts:Washington’s Outhouse”

The thing I’m most looking forward to though is visiting Salem, Massachusetts. Home of the infamous Witch Trials.

Seriously, I am so excited I can barely contain myself. The history, the legends, the madness. It’s gonna be good.

I should have some totally awesome Boston pics to post when I get back, in any case.

Yay for Autumn!

 

 

 

 

100th Post and My Novel’s Premise

Okay, if you’ve ever been curious about this mysterious world of writing I immerse myself in for ridiculous amounts of time, and why I always look so ragged while doing it–this video perfectly encapsulates what I go through on a daily basis during this process. (It’s funny and tragic and so true.)

Probably the hardest part is that the final stage of editing is exactly like the video portrays. This is why people are always asking me if they can read my work, and I’m just running around going, “It’s not finished! It’s not finished!”

That is yet another reason why I have utilized you, dear reader, to keep me accountable so I don’t go wandering around in the editing woods forever.

But until you get to read the completed work of my current endeavor–as promised, here is what I’ve been working on for the past two months.

The say there is nothing new under the sun, and I would heartily agree with that statement. However, you can take something that has been done before and add so many twists and turns to it that it becomes something that feels fairly new.

I have always been on the fence about George MacDonald’s tale, The Princess and the Goblin.

I watched a cartoon movie version of it when I was a kid and although I liked it, later in life I tried to read the actual story and couldn’t get into it.

It’s about two kids who battle against evil goblins, all the while growing up mentally and spiritually–discovering courage and finding faith in the unseen. Clearly, it’s a children’s book and maybe that’s why I always thought it could use a little more edge to it.

This is my edge.

For now, the working title of my story is:

Arco

Definition: arco (adverb or adjective) with the bow —usually used as a direction in music for players of stringed instruments.

Sadie Sullivan is a junior in a high school and a hopeful cellist. She has been attempting to learn the cello for a little over a year, in order to impress her crush and hopefully gain some cool points in the process. The thing is, Sadie isn’t good at the cello. At all. Currently her best and closest friend is her cousin, Charlie, who can easily take the ‘cool’ spotlight when he wants it. You can see how this would leave her in an awkward position.

One summer night Sadie is practicing her cello on her instructor’s mansion balcony when she sees some dark figures running through the gardens down below. This is the first sign that something suspicious might be happening in the picturesque town of Ruby Falls.

Later, Charlie drops Sadie off to pack up some things at her house. Sadie’s mom, (and only parent) is out of town on a business trip so Sadie is going to stay with her aunt and uncle for the week.

While she is packing, Sadie is kidnapped by two real, live goblins. In a fortuitous twist of fate, she manages to drag her cello underground with her but she is forced to leave it behind as the goblins carry her onward to their stronghold. The stronghold is currently packed with hundreds of other goblins all waiting orders from their ruthless Goblin Queen.

On her way to be interrogated and killed by the Queen, Sadie’s kidnappers are intercepted by Prince Kale, the Goblin Queen’s only son. For reasons of his own he helps her escape. She is, however, left to find her way out by herself after she flees the stronghold.

During her search she finds her cello again and unable to leave it behind takes it with her.

Now, I won’t tell you how or why it happens but through a series of unfortunate (or fortunate) events within this topsy turvy goblin underworld, Sadie ends up being merged with her cello. As part cello, she must learn to control and play the strings running through her body. And the music is different now. She is waaay better than good..

If you’ve read The Princess and the Goblin you know that George McDonald’s goblins can’t stand to listen to music, song or poetry. Now the goblins creeping around the town of Ruby Falls are well aware of the pervasive presence of 21st century music and have found easy ways to block it out.

Luckily for Sadie, her music is not ordinary and she swiftly finds herself in the middle of a longstanding war between the goblins and their milder, peaceful adversaries, the hobgoblins. As death, adventure and love unfold, Sadie begins to discover exactly who she is and what sort of stuff she’s been made of all along.

Aaaaand that’s it! There’s more work to be done but with any luck, and lots of persistance, I have high hopes that this story could be the one that makes it to print.

Okay, and just so you know I am taking a few days break from blogging after tonight. I’ve literally missed only one day in 101 days of blogging and my brain needs to recharge. :)

Have a great Tuesday and I’ll be back soon!

Day 0: Finished

Day 0-

(approx.) 1,270 Words

Total Words: 79,819

FIRST DRAFT FINISHED.

I am at the same time happy and sad, exhausted and elated, dreading the oncoming editing, but knowing that getting through the first draft is one of the hardest parts because blank paper is horrifically daunting.

It still needs a TON AND A HALF of work if not more to make it readable, but I will be setting the next goals for that very soon.

But as promised, tomorrow I will be posting the story premise. For those of you who’ve cheered me on in my little boat (and also when my goal boat sank at the end) I can’t wait to share what I’ve been cryptically writing about for the past 55+ days.

Thank you.

Thank you.

Thank you.

Thank you for your encouragement and excitement. Thank you for standing beside me when I was sleep deprived, discouraged, delirious and prone to forgetting during my ridiculous writing schedule. For all of that I thank you from the bottom of my heart.

My greatest and final hope is that this story will find it’s way into your hands sometime in the near future and you can say to yourself, ‘yeah, I was there when she did this. I’m as much a part of this story as any of the characters’.

Believe me, that credit is all yours.

Thank you.

Day 1/16: Down to the Wire

Yes, I am fully aware I am running out of fractions to divide off of.

I finished half of the last chapter today, but I was literally busy almost all day, and thus Sunday will be the day I finish.

I have to admit, it’s difficult. I’m not sure what to wrap up. I’m not sure where to leave my main characters. In fact I kind of don’t want to leave them because I want to let them keep talking with each other for as long as I’m able.

But all good things have to come to an end so there can be new, exciting beginnings around the corner.

Day 1/16-

(approx.) 1,622 Words

Total Words: 78,271

Day 1/8: Get Ready for The End

I didn’t have time to finish the final chapter tonight because I was getting ready for a little trip I’m taking in a few weeks. I should let you know about it soon. :)

I had to listen to some powerful music to get me through this second to last chapter though.

It needs a bucket load of editing for it to be good, but I think the heart of it is there and that’s all I needed.

One more chapter and I’m done.

Day 1/8-

(approx.) 1,456 Words

Total Words: 76,681

Day 1/4: The Final Battle Begins

Finally wrote most of my battle scene tonight.

I feel like I could go out and win a war or something right now

Unfortunately, I told someone I’d be going to bed early tonight and I’m a little late on that, but my bed time will be a lot sooner than normal. Yay!

(I am beginning to look like some of the scarier characters in my story, which is why I need to hit the hay.)

Day 1/4-

(approx.) 2,051 Words

Total Words: 75,241

Day 1/2: So Very Very Close

I literally have one and a half chapters left to write.

I wanted to finish writing the second to last chapter so bad tonight, but my brain shorted out on me. There’s always that point where it says, “Sorry Charlie, you’re going to bed whether you like it or not.”

It’s a good thing I’ll be done soon too because my body has been complaining from all the writing. Every now and again, my right forearm gets these weird pangs in it, and the annoying pain from sitting too long likes to shoot up my back and hook me over the shoulder. That hasn’t been particularly pleasant either.

Ay me, the wounds of the writer.

Seriously going to take a vacation after this.

Day 1/2-

(approx.) 1,226 Words

Total Words: 73,356

P.S. If you’ve never heard any of the gentle and moving works of Ludovico Einaudi, you should check them out on Grooveshark. Gorgeous and very relaxing.